Monday, November 12, 2012

KC3: subtopoic Sites



 Sites
            Hawaii is known for their natural wonders and Hawaiian heritage that attract many tourists from across the globe. People pay attention to the beauties of Hawaii but don't really notice places like parks or places that shelter many homeless people and not being aware of it surprises many people when they take notice of it.
            Hotels in Hawaii attract tourist to the best of their ability from Food, Hawaiian Heritage, to location that effects how many tourists they attract. One hotel that recently was built that attracts many people and is also famous for its mark is the Aulani Resort. One main reason it is famous is for its Mickey Mouse mark which helped attract many of people's attention. The hotel depicts Hawaii's Heritage so well that even people from Hawaii favor it. A local from Waipahu even said "It's as if it were a different island yet still on Oahu". Another famous hotel in Hawaii is the Hilton Waikiki Beach. This hotel gives a wide variety of activities for tourist to participate in, The hotel creates a comfortable atmosphere for all of the guests.. Hilton's location gives tourists accessibility to go around town. It's famous for its famous for it big slide and MAC daddy pancakes which was showed on Man vs. Food. These are just some reasons tourists also choose to visit Hawaii, they also go to see natural wonder, national park, and a certain memorial.
            Some of the best attractions in Hawaii all have a unique feature just to itself that attracts many tourists that wish to see its wonders and some are free. This makes tourists even more attracted to it just hearing the word free. the USS Arizona memorial allows you to get in for free but if you want to have a better experience paying is also an option, this is also true for some other attractions to visit. People also come to see places such as the Polynesian culture center to see the history and what has happened throughout the years. People who would want to broaden their knowledge about another culture would be interested in the Polynesian Culture Center. Also those who wish to know about Pearl harbor or had someone in their family around that time. Things like that has effected who has come and who has stayed in Hawaii.
            Unlike all the other sites parks are ones that are not so good around in Hawaii, there may be some that are well taken care of but some are the homes of some less fortunate. As tourism takes a major role in how Hawaii makes money, if Hawaii were to have a lower revenue some people would have to be jobless because the place they were working for has shut down. Many people only have one job to rely on so if they get fired it may cause them to be homeless. If someone were to go to a park that may not be well supervised, they may be surprised to see the amount of people. It's not just parks, there are also people sitting around Chinatown. In Chinatown you can see the amount of people who are jobless or those who might just be lazy. People can also see tents of those beside sidewalks or those who beg for money. These are just some things you can see on a trip to a Hawaii if you just take a short trip.
            In all Hawaii is a good place to visit but if you walk around a bit you can see that there are still people who are homeless. It wouldn't even matter if Hawaii is a paradise, it's still like any other place with good views, hotels, and people living on the streets. But for those who like natural beauty, Hawaii is a great place to be.

1 comment:

  1. Your subtopic is a bit unclear in your entire essay, not sure if you are discussing hotels, things to do or money. You need to refocus the essay and make sure that your thesis in your intro clearly states it. Also you need to find more effective evidence. A person's opinion is not really good research. Something more effective would be a professionals opinion or facts about actual aulani resort. Also please read over some of your word use contains error or comprehension errors. For example, "mickey mouse mark" is highly confusing and doesnt make sense.

    Lastly your conclusion is VERY CONFUSING. You all of a sudden talk about homeless people then say how hawaii has good hotels, but natural beauty is great. None of this was even mentioned in the body section except for hotels. Please redo. AS(2-)

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